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句子结构是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素，但这并不意味着要求考生具备写长难句的能力。在追求输出像雅思阅读一样精到的语言之前，我们首先要确保的应当是写出来的句子是正确的。有效的句子甚而段落通常应当同时满足以下五个要素：一致、连贯、简洁、强调、多样。 1. 一致：如句内的逻辑关系，注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。 Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be afamous musician. → He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In hischildhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970she became a famous musician. 2. 连贯：这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。 We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman. → We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable. Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable youngwoman. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious. → He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured. Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye canreach. → Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far asthe eye can reach. Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye canreach. He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed. → He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobodybelieved. 3. 简洁：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。 It was small in size and blue in colour. → It was small and blue. He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France. → He prefers French wines. 4. 强调：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea)，每个段落都要有主题句(topicsentence)一般，每个句子都要围绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要表现的重点。 He is modest and hardworking and is a good student. → He is a good student, modest and hardworking. There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple. → In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 yearsold. At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad wouldbe possible. → The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew thatsomething bad would happen. 5. 多样：中文重重复，英文重替代，中英差异使然。 |
